Thanks to all for the listen and comments. Most of the issues mentioned that maybe could be better are being looked at and at least some will be addressed prior to doing the final cut, but its good get some feedback from those whose opinion I value indicating that I'm on the right track.

Some of the final edits will of course be influenced by the mood of the song and the emotion that we want to try and capture as well.

If I ever get it done, I'll post the finished version.

Dang....This is addicting.

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