what Josie said.

But to that I'll add that you did a great job on the video... the pictures you chose are emotionally stirring in conjunction with the song's message. All your questions paid off!

And I also like the composition of the song. Did you say it was original?

The main comments as Josie said are the length and the fact that your vocals are so far back in the mix that most of the words could not be discerned by my ears.

Whether the length of a song is too much is really a question of how it will be used. If you plan to play it at a church service during communion, it might not be long enough, depending on the size of the congregation. But for airplay, even on the local CC station, my guess is it would be too long.

But, having said all that, my overall impression is very favorable.
Good luck in your music ministry! You're off to a good start