Hi Charlie,

Loved it - had a wonderful sense of fun to it. It's great as is but I did have some ideas to throw out.

I thought the hook could be "Close Encounters of the Girl Kind" - because girl sounds more like third and it's just more silly.

I thought you could do a hip-hop version with the verse being more spoken like a rap and the music being more outer spacey and etherial with a strong sub bass line to carry the beat. Then the chorus could have more voicing and singing going on.

Anyway wonderful stuff and best of luck with it.

Pete Gallatin
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