A very nice song Paul, especially the guitar solo, and your vocals are as usual very impressive.

Thoughts as I listened:
- 5:05 is too long. Once the chorus message is delivered nothing different happens afterwards. I think shorter would be more impactful.
- The key change near the end feels like a big lurch; it's a good idea but somehow sounds awkward at the moment.
- I'd put your vocal back a bit in the mix. I know from your other songs you like it well forward, but the backing sounds firmly relegated and somehow separate when in fact there are things in it to listen to and enjoy on a par with the vocal.

As I said, just thoughts; bin 'em as necessary!

John


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