Now this is artfully constructed indeed

I really like the ‘A’ chord sequence and the keys patch at 1:45

Would have liked something a bit more insistent in the perc. track (yes even the dreaded cowbell)
Personally, I don’t much like the oohs and aahs
Maybe the key change could be better exploited (say a little run to take it up to the lead note in the ‘B’ melody)
Also the ending is maybe a bit odd. It ends just when you think its taking off again!

So in answer to your question, Tim

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I hope you like it.







I most cetainly do. - had me reaching for my white suit!!

regards,

Marc