Skyoma, I listened to your song several times and I must admit that I post my comments with some reservation. While reading your posting of the words in the Off-Topic forum, I wasn't quite sure who or what the song was about or the object of your affection. But I must admit that after listening to the song, I would have to agree with the producers' comments. It sounds very Sesame Street like. Probably not so much the words but the melody, instrumentation and tempo itself. Not that I'm any more experienced than perhaps you, but the song's construct is very simple and predictable. You're trying to say a lot, express many emotions and do so many repeditive different ways. Perhaps trying to simplify the message, focus on one or two key thoughts and adding different instrumentation may help. I hope that you take my comments as constructive and not critical. I know that this tune is important to you.

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