Nice song. The only suggestion I would give is to change up things at least every 8 bars. For example maybe change up the instruments playing the melody every 8 bars. Do not get me wrong it is still a very nice song. I would only suggest more change in the songs flow, that way you keep everyone guessing what is coming next. Keep on sharing!

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