Well, Mike...your production has taken a quantam leap, my friend. Very clean and tasteful. I like this song better than the first, but it's actually very different musically, so it's hard to compare. I like them both...differently. Anyway...I listened with a headset and your panorama sounds quite nice. Here are some things I heard that you might want to play with:

-vocal needs a de-esser. A bit too much sibilance for my taste. You probably have a de-esser plugin.

-the Strat and the steel seem to be competing with each other for sonic space. Split 'em up right and left and don't let them walk on each other i.e. alternate the volumes during each one's break.

-You vocal seemed just a tad hot, but when I listened through the headset it wasn't as prominent. Songs that are being promoted as vocal demos often have hotter vocals to be sure the lyrics are heard. So it's rather a matter of taste. I'd like to hear that vocal with a LITTLE BIT of echo (slapback, kinda like rock-a-billy) and a harmony vocal during the chorus. If you can't do your own harmonies or don't have another vocalist available try a light chorus effect on your lead vocal, or double it like you did with the guitar and then chorus one of the tracks. If you're really adventurous, run the original vocal track through the TC Helicon Harmony effect in BIAB or RealBand and do a four part thing like Crosby, Stills, Nash, and YOUNG. (see last paragraph)

-The drums definately need more reverb.

-The ending needs to be cleaner...maybe a bit longer with the final notes held. Do you know how to do that with BIAB?

The thing that REALLY blows me away about this song...actually it's not the song...it's your voice...is how much you sound like Neil Young. You actually sing quite a bit better than him, but your "voice quality" is dead on. If I didn't know it was you, I'd think Neil had bought a copy of BIAB and was trying to mess with us. If I were producing you I'd ride that horse right into the ground. Seriously, you should use this to your advantage.

Don't worry about the "Time" theme...you're on a roll!!

Great job, man. Keep 'em coming

Bob

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