Mike,

If only I could sing as well as you....
Great song, especially enjoyed the lyrics/story of the song.

I don't have the chops to comment other than the ending is short as Bob mentioned.

I prefer to have the vocal strong as in your song. The vocals to me are the
"Instruments" needed to hear. Your voice is strong, but have a soft quality, so great from
my "hearing". Also listened on my Studio Phones. Whole different ballgame.

Thanks for your hard work and sharing.


FrankB

Down The Street vs2015 12-03-2014
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