I liked the song, and the guitar solo in particular. It fits the genre well, and it's nice to hear a relatively sparse arrangement. I can hear the Neil Young in your voice that Bob pointed out. The main negative is that the drum seems a bit boxy and distant, like it's in another room.

On the verses, you fade a bit as you reach the end the the lyric. I remember reading that most amateurs can begin the notes well - it's the sustain that's tricky! (Well, that and everything else ) You've got that talking/singing thing going on, but Bob's right on about the potential in your voice.

Thanks for posting!

-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?