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Additional lyrics to help tell the story line a little better. Any critiques and/or comments would be greatly appreciated. http://soundcloud.com/msfrancis/when-i-will-walk-awaythanks
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Love the song! The lyrics, backing tracks and your vocals are top notch! The only problem is there is a ton of digital distortion through out the song. You may want to back and check each track separately for distortion. If you are using some mastering tools check for distortion prior to and after using those tools as they can produce distortion if the input/output ratios are off.
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Nice improvement on the lyrics. Nice tracks too.
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Nice. Is the piano BIAB too? The vox could use a bit of reverb and maybe some EQ, but everything sounds good.
Good song.
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thanks everyone for the critiques. Yes, all the music is BIAB. After hearing your comments i backed the gain down about 4db in the master remix to help with the distortion (using Ozone 4 & 5 for mastering inside of Audacity), added some more reverb to vocals and even changed one more line of the lyrics. remix is posted again back at the original web address http://soundcloud/msfrancis/when-i-will-walk-away366: Bass, Electric, Ev 065 831: Piano, Acoustic, Solo-Accompaniment Pop Bouncy Sw 85 822:Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking Country Waltz Sw 085 824:Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming Country Waltz Sw 085 982:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm CountryWaltzCleanArp Sw 085 986:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm CountryWaltzGrittyA-B Sw 085 1126:Pedal Steel, Rhythm CountryWaltz Sw 085 Drums: NashClassicWaltzSw^1 - a:SideStick, HiHat, b:Snare, HiHat
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Nice work! It's a good country tune, with solid writing and arrangement. It sets up the story and follows through, and the arrangement does the right things in the right places. It's predictable, but in a good way.  It would be nice if the harmonies were a bit wider, but it sounds like you're using BIAB to create them, so it's probably safest to leave them more in the background like you've got them. There's still a bit of crackle at 2:27 - you can see where it clips on the waveform.
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Thanks Dave for the comments. I'll check out the crackle.
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Beuitiful melody you have created here.
Great lyrics.
Job well done.
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Thanks Robert. I appreciate the kind comments.
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