This has GREAT potential! Super lyrics and backing tracks; a toe taper for sure. Your voice is really good!

I also thought that the instrumentation was slightly out of sync is spots.

I thought that the drums MAY be to busy in sections of this song, like the chorus.

Although I like voices out front this may be a tad too much out front.

This is just me and other may or may not agree. However I think this is a fantastic song that just needs a little polish to take it over the top.


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