EXCELLENT up to the ending, but that has already been said.

I believe this is your best to date. Just polish the ending and you will have a keeper.


I think my wife has started to show the first signs of dementia.
She said she can't remember what she ever saw in me!

64 bit Win 10 Pro, the latest BiaB/RB, Roland Octa-Capture audio interface, a ton of software/hardware