Hi Mick.

Looks good to me.

Just a small point - I notice that the rhyme changes in the last verse. I might be inclined to consider switching lines 2 and 3 -

This much is real
I am complete
I finally feel
The earth beneath my feet
I am alive
And truly thrive
Whenever you’re next to me

I'd also look at trying to get the title into the last line of verse 1, as it is in the other verses, rather than in line 2, so it's got more chance of becoming the "hook".

Hope you'll post a link to the song when it's finished.

ROG.