David,

Few more Idea's.

I touched up, trying to stay within bounds.

Once I was lost
Now I am found
You give me hope
You turn me around
You bring me up
You grace my cup
Whenever you’re next to me

This much is real
I finally feel
I am complete
I find the earth beneath my feet
I feel your breath sweet...or I feel your heart beat
I'm now complete
Whenever you’re next to me


Or maybe just couple more Idea's.

Good luck!

Last edited by seeker; 08/23/12 04:19 PM.