Pete this is really really good! The lyrics are super as is the chord structure and the vocals. A real happy kind of I love you song!

Personally I thought that the rhythm guitars were too loud. Try cutting them back and see if the song sounds more balanced. I think it would. I would also keep the drums playing until the end. Again this is just my thoughts and other may or may not agree.

You would get more listens if you put this in the Users Showcase forum.

I always put compression first followed by whatever effects I want to use. Putting compression after can cause some weird sounding artifacts.

Again this is a great song that just needs a little polish IMHO.


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