I really enjoyed this. The chorus is really nice. They only thing I would change is that in the 1st phrase of the chorus, it sounds like you are taking too many breaths. But the 2nd and 3rd phrases in the chorus don't have that.

"Listen closely and you'll realize [breath] there's so much not seen by your eyes [breath],
but your heart can recognize [short breath] the sounds of love."

I think it would flow a lot better if you could sing it:

"Listen closely and you'll realize there's so much not seen by your eyes [breath],
but your heart can recognize the sounds of love."

The chorus is really catchy; I just think it needs to flow a little more to really grab me.

This is a great song. Thanks for posting it!


John

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