Josie,

Nice song! I really like your voice!
This is an excellent first effort. I would suggest some separation on the guitars, cello, fiddle. Everything seems to be pretty much in the middle. You might try panning one guitar 20-40% right and the other left, same with the fiddle & cello. Experiment with different spots in the mix (I generally leave my drums & bass pretty much center) but other instruments can benefit from panning left or right. I also think some FX (reverb,chorus, etc) would add some nice flavor especially on the vocal, guitars & fiddle.

Once again... Excellent first effort!

I have a new song I've been working on for the last several weeks and hope to be posting soon.

Keep it up,

Greg