A nice song Josie with well-crafted lyrics. An excellent start if you're new to homerecording!

As for suggestions, I'd play with the panning a bit more, I think you could take some of the instruments wider. Some high 'air' EQ on the vocals and a tiny touch of reverb would lift them nicely; they sound dry and slightly muffled.

Well done, you have a good ear for recording and a lovely voice.

John

PS: Many moons ago I used to live in Simonstown, not too far away from you?


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