Nice arrangement! I particularly liked the harmonies and the strummed guitar is very effective in setting the mood for the piece.

You've got the bombastic sound, but it needs a bit more edge to it. Listening to James Young on Heavy Metal Poisoning for comparison, it's interesting how little difference there is between this an overdone lounge-lizard approach to the lyric.

Thanks for posting this! I don't think it's too far out for this forum.


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?