I listened to this last week through speakers, and thought it sounded great, but the reverb made it unintelligible... for me. But in headphones, it's clear.

At 2:16, on the word "and I'll simply need to tell you", there's something (perhaps pitch correction?) on the vocal that jumps out. From 2:24 to 2:30 the vocal has a similar "fuzzy" electronic effect, but with the layered vocal it doesn't come out as much.

Everything else in the mix seems well seated and smooth.

Other than that, very solid and nicely done.

-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?