Hi Leonard,

Good on you! Taking the plunge and making your first post is awesome! As Floyd has said, you're doing great

I agree with Floyd's comments on how to make this piece sparkle a little more. One of things I continually find is that mixing is an incredibly challenging part of putting music together. I've found that there comes a point where the only productive thing for me to do is to put the mix away for 3 or 4 days and them come back to it with fresh ears. That always helps me. Maybe that is something you could try with this one (if you haven't done so already).

All the best,
Noel


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