Very evocative! My only thought is that it would be very effective to drop the guitar for a bit, and let the pads take over. It might not match the "storyline", but it would be a good contrast. I liked how you used the bass, yet didn't swamp the mix in mud.

Anyway, very nicely played and put together.


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?