Not my place to post anything really, not being a Country player and all, but it struck me that the Chorus was too long. Its got a great hook in the chords (G,D,A) that I'm sure someone could put words to but they play over too many times. I cant tell then when the "verse" is starting - didnt seem the same as the opening 38 secs.
Bounces along beautifully as a BT though and with a bit of discipline and some decisions on what starts where, this could be the makings of a good tune.
Feel free to tell me to go play - -
Ian


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