Hi Darren,

This is one great first BiaB song. It sounds like you have been a songwriter for sometime now!

I agree with the others, you are a singer. In fact you are a pretty good singer so what ever you do keep singing.

I also liked the lyrics, excellent job on that.

Excellent job on the arrangement also. Personally I like the solo piano-backing track so I wouldn’t change it. I think one of the reasons this works is because of the fact that you are a good singer who puts emotion into your songs.

Two thumbs up.


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