welcome to the forum, and well, if you are not a singer I'm a second base for the Yankees. it sounded very good to me, and yes, I'm not really a singer, that's why all my songs are instrumentals. And the piano accompaniment for this kind of song is very appropriate for it IMHO, so I wouldn't change anything. Well done.
Keep'em coming.

Mike B.


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