Sorry, just got around to this one and as I see most has already been said.

You did an overall good job with this song but with this said I too did not get all the words especially towards the ending. And also (for me anyway) any song over 3.5 minutes had really be a blockbuster or have me locked into the story line biting my nails. . . but I have been told I may have an attention span issue.

I have been listening to your songs on soundcloud since you joined the forum and I can see great advances from your first to where you are now.

Again IMHO, overall this was a very good effort.

Later,