I think this is a really good tune Greg. Sounds very pro to my ears and I really enjoy it.

If I were mixing this I would change the mix on that answering electric lead guitar in the left channel. I'd put more reverb on it and mix it back. As it is, it crowds the vocal a bit IMO. It's a good part, I just don't think it needs to be quite so 'front and center' Also, it kind of has a bit of a truncated sound to my ears and the extra reverb would probably fix this.

This is a really nice sounding track. It sounds organic, IE you can't tell what's you and what's BIAB - IE that's a good thing.

Peace,

Ian

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