I hope you don't mind the re-review!
The rhymes like "God/love" and "grace/fades" are nice and subtle.
But... I mis-heard a couple of the opening lines.
"He came to Earth" initially sounded like "He came to
us"
"The gentle man from Galilee" came out for me as "The
gentleman from Galilee"
Maybe I need to get the wax cleaned from my ears!

On the sheet music, there's an extra 16th note rest on measure 41.
As always, nice work!