“It doesn't seem to be a word that overly "glamorizes" the relationship. It seems to be just another ordinary choice in a song filled with trite and lazy "rhymes" (boy/boy and good/good).”



David -

You really are an expert on critiquing the songs of others. You say that this one is “filled with trite and lazy "rhymes".

On what basis do you claim any expertise in songwriting? On what basis do you presume to critique anyone's songwriting?

I have yet to hear any of your wonderful, well-crafted songs.