Originally Posted By: 90 dB
You really are an expert on critiquing the songs of others.


Am I? I never made that claim.

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You say that this one is “filled with trite and lazy "rhymes".


Yes. Sorry,Gilley.

I quoted "rhymes" because he rhymed "boy" with "boy" and "good" with "good."

As for "trite", I'll defer to Pat Pattison on that one.

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On what basis do you claim any expertise in songwriting?


I never claimed any expertise in songwriting.

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On what basis do you presume to critique anyone's songwriting?


My comments were explaining why I didn't think this song promote or glamorize pedophilia. Specifically, I was speaking to the choice of the word "sigh", which is the only place where the narrator of the song voices any emotional response.


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I have yet to hear any of your wonderful, well-crafted songs.


I'm not sure how that invalidates my ability to parse a song.

Why the ad hominem attack?

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Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?