Sounded like the Beatles to start and then it morphed into King Crimson and Pinko Floyd.

Nice....

On my computer speakers there seems to be some high frequencies that need taming. Overall the mix sounds subdued on the mid high end but then there is something up there in the sibilent range.... mostly noticed on the vocals.

I'd like to hear a more present crack on the snare.

Very nice song. fits the genre nicely.... I was there in that era learning my chops from the masters.

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