You are supposed to only post original songs in this section:

The songs must be originals, no copyrighted or "cover" songs. You must have all of the rights to the songs.

Back to the song -- this is a great song. I felt that your use of harmonies on every single line was too much. It distracted from the impact of the story. I would reconsider the arrangement on this one.

Now at bandcamp: Crows Say Vee-Eh @ bandcamp or soundcloud: Kevin @ soundcloud