Lawrence,

Cool RAW in-your-face rock'n'roll! Sounds like someone put a great garage band in one room with mics to capture a one-take and let 'em loose. I think the drums should be up some to really be a part of the action. Everyone is tearing it up - the drummer should be too... (maybe just a personal preference).

Your vocal sounds like you were born to lead this band. Pure fire.

COOL, cool song. A raw energy every bit a match for the band. Love the changing couplet chorus. Nothing but solid.

floyd