Hi Josie,
Gosh you sing beautifully. This was so good to listen to! I notice that there has been a comment or two on the chord progression. Personally, I'm a fan of the chords you used. I think they're very inventive and created some really nice musical tensions that resolved with a very satisfying sense of resolution. In fact, I reckon more could even be made from this!
I'm with floyd, I bet you could market a CD of songs like this

Best wishes,
Noel