Very nice job.

Trying to catch up on all the tunes I missed....

Sounds good so far.... now just work that vocal into the mix a bit and you have an excellent song. Since you said the vox was a scratch I'll withhold my comments until the final version on this is done.

Loved the story line of the song. That's a great story.


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