I liked it from the start...

good writing job. Nice lyric crafting.

"now you can even find God on line"... lol....!!!

well done. loved it.


just a thought on the fade, a little something more creative... instead of the fade>>>.... song stutters like a glitched CD ... sound of old dial up modem (fax machine sounds) trying to connect.... dial tone... silence..


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