Ken,

This is interesting. I think Noel nailed when he said he could see this in a stage musical play production.

A lot of work went into this ...obviously.

Keep up the good work.

One thing I will comment about: I would have a look at finding a more suitable key for your voice. I think, by raising the key a bit, the song would be easier to sing. You sound like you are down in the bottom half of your vocal range quite a bit of the time. There's quite a range from top to bottom on the melody. Some big jumps too. Just something to consider on future projects. Most singers prefer to be in that top half as it allows them to apply power and control better.

This would be really cool as a duet.... have a lady singing some of those lines back to you.....

Last edited by Guitarhacker; 01/14/14 07:10 AM.
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