Thanks again Mac,
You seem to be the only one to respond to my posts at the moment!
But I'm afraid you are talking above my level of knowledge. I bought band in a Box because I'm *not* a musician, rather than because I *am* one!
I've tried dropping in what you've suggested, but it doesn't seem to work. I'm not even sure I've set the chorus which is in the higher key correctly. Here's what I have:

Main key chorus:
C#m - C#m - A - A
E - E - B - B
C#m - C#m - A - A
E - E - B - B
B - C#m|F#7

Raised key chorus:
D#m - D#m - B - B
F# - F# - C#- C#
D#m - D#m - B - B
F# - F# - C# - C#
C# - C# - D#m - D#m
D#m - D#m [Auto ending]

Can you or anyone please tell me what I'm doing wrong - it doesn't sound right at all, in fact the C#m|F#7 transition makes it feel like going down a key although F#7 does seem like the right chord to link to D#m.
Excuse my ignorance but I'm learning while doing!

Thanks.


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