First of all: another fine example of your guitarskills.

Some points you might want to take a look at:

After the second count-in click there is some kind of noise starting. I think it is the leadguitartrack which has a 50 Hz noise to it. Try cutting that track right up to the point where the guitar actually starts. This way the sound of the guitar hides the noise.

At some points in the song you might want to get clearer what the leading part is, so that it doesn't get snowed under by the backingparts. (take a look at the parts after 1.15 and 1:45 for example). You might want to bring the lead more up front in some parts.

Perhaps you could try setting up a wider stage: Try panning the backingparts some more left and right. Imagine the band on stage and try placing each instrument on the right spot using panning. Experiment and see what works (and what doesn't)

Great arrangement and playing (but hey, what's new?) Keep on workin' and keep on posting!

Mike
www.mikewever.nl