Hey Scott,

I really like the philosophy of those lyrics. The other man's grass is not always greener smile Like Richard, the bridge really stood out to me. I loved the way you left line 3 hanging so that the second couplet pushed full force into the final chorus. That's skill!

As so many have said before me, this is a very solid write. Kudos to you!

All the best,
Noel


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