Very nice job... the mix sounds like it's pretty wide on my speakers.

Job well done on the engineering.

Musicianship is excellent As are the vocals.

This sounds like Bob Dylan meets the Supremes/Motown on a rocking tune. Definitely the coolest tune I've heard here in the forum in a very long time. For sure the best of this year to date.

I loved it.

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