Well, that was certainly interesting. Very cool and creative.

I've never liked the vocaloids but, this is the one thing that I do think they do very well..... as long as they're not trying to sing words....at least English words. It was nearly impossible to tell they were synth voices except in a very few places. (higher register slides)

I too like the Santana intro.... I would have brought that back as a recurring theme in a few places..... but, I enjoyed this for what it was nevertheless.

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