Ha, ha -- you did a good job bashing your own tune in your description, don't do that! OK, "it's not contemporary enough.... too slow, too old fashioned.. LOL! We don't care about that stuff!

Real nice guitar playing. By the way, someone mentioned the cello -- the cello is really a popular sound in some americana bands nowadays. I had to listen to the song a second time to find that cello, but it wasn't there. I just read up above that you removed it! Good trick to get me to listen again (thank you!). ... and yes, that is a mighty fine ending. Write the songs you want to write -- they are good as is. I enjoyed my listen(s)!

(An aside) Charlie: To me, your comments came off as you intended them, they were respectful and to the point. Just because a song isn't "commercial" in the Nashville country or LA/NY/London pop markets, doesn't mean it is "bad" and I think you made that point clearly. If folks want to write commercial hits or get "cuts", then they had better find local artists now before they make the move to the "record" towns.

Now at bandcamp: Crows Say Vee-Eh @ bandcamp or soundcloud: Kevin @ soundcloud