Hi Jeff.

A nice track with some interesting changes in texture in the backing.

Lots of potential here, once you get the vocal sound right - as you say, it's suffering a bit from the open room acoustics. The only other thing I might point out is that I found some of the snare drum breaks a little intrusive and maybe a bit of compression on the drum track might help that.

As Greg says, generally the track works great as a whole and I'd be interested to hear a final version of the mix.

ROG.