Nice tune... Mellow.

The sax seemed a bit too dry and loud for proper seating into the mix.

The thing about using RB tracks is that it's hard to get them to establish a melodic theme that identifies the verses and differentiates them from choruses..... but hey, nice jam anyway. RB tracks work well when you don't exactly need a melodic theme in the music.

I hate faded endings. I rarely hear faded endings in live performances,,,, yeah it happens but most tunes are buttoned up in one way or another.

Good job on the song....I did like it.

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