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Hi Richard, Very creative! I really like the abaab rhyme scheme you've used in the verses. It's an excellent choice of rhyme pattern if you want to keep the words moving until the last line of a verse. To my ears, the rhyme closures along the journey act as the equivalent of commas and it's not until the final 'b' rhyme that everything sounds complete. Robert Frost (a highly recognised American poet) used the same rhyme scheme in "The Road Not Taken". Here's a LINK to his poem if you are interested in having a read. I enjoyed the story! All the best, Noel
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Greetings Noel. Thanks. I always like to read your technical and insightful comments. Enjoyed the link leading to the road less traveled. Way to go every time. Cheers.
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Fun tune, Richard! Enjoyed the lyrics and playful style!
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Thanks Plish. Glad you got a bit of fun out of it. Cheers.
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I'm late to the party and everything that I wanted to say has already been said, i.e. great story, good vocals and a very good mix.
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Thanks Mario for the listen and the comment. Cheers.
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There has not been one comment here that we don't agree with --- and we read them all.
Absolutely nothing left to add other than to express our personal enjoyment of several listens to a wonderful tune! You are remarkably consistent.
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Many thanks Jan and Bud. Haven't written anything since February for FAWM. This was the last of them and I'm looking forward to some new writes. Cheers.
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