Some good blues, almost southern rock, coming out of upstate NY. Good job for a (WIP) work in progress?? This is a nice mix, good selection of BB instruments and your vocals work well within this genre. A great first effort.

As a WIP, I would only say that I felt the beginning of the song seemed a little busy with the choice of guitars you use. About 0.28 into the song when the riff changes seems to be a better starting place to me. I know it is completely subjective but just throwing it out for consideration. I felt the groove of the song was jumping back and forth in the first verse because of the guitar riffs but the song groove settled nicely from the second verse on. Your overall choice of guitars worked well together.

I really enjoyed the song, writing and production overall and look forward to hearing more of your work.

Charlie

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