Thanks for the constructive comments.



Originally Posted By: Guitarhacker
This has a french street cafe sound about it.

Nice for the most part. And I like this.

However....

The bass is very distracting and not in a good way. It's too low (musical notes) throughout most of it...call it an octave low for the most part. In addition, it also is playing something other than the roots of the chords. Occasionally, in passing and moving that is OK but to play entire phrases off the root in this style of music is distracting from the beauty that exists in the tune.

I'd look into redoing the bass line. You could probably get away with a tuba on the bass considering the genre and instrumentation in the rest of the song.

BTW: it was considerate of you to write this for your friends.

Graham............

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