I haven't hear the demo so my comments are about this version. Your voice is a good match for the song; you sing with great emotion. However your voice does not sit well with the banjo and fiddle. The voice is too upfront. The banjo and fiddle sound a little tone starved to me.

Unfortunately I'm at the stage I can tell something in the mix is not right. I am not proficent enough to recognize the issue(s) and suggest corrective actions.


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